Gobnait Posted June 11, 2015 Report Share Posted June 11, 2015 There was a concrit that I got that I don't understand, and I'd like a hand because I can't contact the person who did it. I went on a writer's forum, but they immediately got turned off by the warning that I gave the original concritter. I called the story "deliberately stupid" because it doesn't have a plot, the only difference between the main character and a Mary Sue is that she's aware that she can god-mode her way out of any hopeless situation but doesn't want to. But what I submitted was an interaction between two minor characters that should stand as a serious writing piece if you acknowledge that it happens as a middle chapter of fanfiction. Please PM me if you would like to help. Quote I have conditions that affect my social awareness. If I am rude, tell me what I could do better. 5'8" & 220 260 pounds | Miles Walked: X 2019: | 1 | 2 | 3 | Pre 2017: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | * | 14 | 15 | 16 | 17 | 18 | 19 | Link to comment
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